❌?کدوم شعر رو ترجیح میدین ؟?❌

اولی لایک? 

دومی قلب ❤

هر دو خوب یا بد کامنت 

اگر انتقادی باشه خوشحال میشم گفته بشه 

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شعر اول                   a night for death 

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 use crack                            a sad track 

 depress with cry                a death without try

 take many pill                         a gun and kill    

 Press and bang             or garrote and hang

 listen to bark                          walk in dark

  a pen        a paper             a knife 

  a loser      a broken       a dead life

 make no choice                         a week voice 

               a room foul of smokness

               a chair between darkness

                a letter with much blood 

                drop like rain from cloud

depressed                 a dead                  a hell

being                  being          i go so well

 

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شعر دوم                                love 

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  Come with me on the earth    I love you l dont miss   It is like a worth                  It is like a birth     Hey baby ,baby when i see you     I cant imagine a world without me and you      L Dont leave me never ever ever      I cant forgat exactly like a saver     Our world is lovely     You never been lonely      Come on come with me    ?I am a lover can you be like me      Your eyes are in my mind      Over of every emotional like kind      Earth is in our hand      Like alice in wonder land      Baby baby my dear my adore      Please kiss me more and more      I am honest with you please accept it      I am long for you please accept it      It is a lovely relationship i am nervous     I just can tell you its a worship i am serious      My beauty come with me i am a lover      I am like a beast with  love power

 

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